diff --git a/docs/topics/forms/index.txt b/docs/topics/forms/index.txt index 021bdd2ff1..857ffaad34 100644 --- a/docs/topics/forms/index.txt +++ b/docs/topics/forms/index.txt @@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ Working with forms the forms API, see :doc:`/ref/forms/api`, :doc:`/ref/forms/fields`, and :doc:`/ref/forms/validation`. -Unless you're planning to build websites and applications that do nothing but +Unless you're planning to build Web sites and applications that do nothing but publish content, and don't accept input from your visitors, you're going to need to understand and use forms. Django provides a range of tools and libraries to help you build forms to -accept input from site visitors, and process and respond to the input. +accept input from site visitors, and then process and respond to the input. HTML forms ========== @@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ As well as its ```` elements, a form must specify two things: * *how*: the HTTP method the data should be returned by -As an example, the standard Django login form contains several ```` -elements: one of ``type="text"`` for the username, one of ``type="password"`` -for the password, and one of one of ``type="submit"`` for the "Log in" button. -It also contains some hidden text fields that the user doesn't see, that Django -uses to determine what to do next. +As an example, the login form for the Django admin contains several +```` elements: one of ``type="text"`` for the username, one of +``type="password"`` for the password, and one of ``type="submit"`` for the +"Log in" button. It also contains some hidden text fields that the user +doesn't see, which Django uses to determine what to do next. It also tells the browser that the form data should be sent to the URL specified in the ``