diff --git a/docs/howto/writing-migrations.txt b/docs/howto/writing-migrations.txt
index 6ef6f6e74a2..02c39dff404 100644
--- a/docs/howto/writing-migrations.txt
+++ b/docs/howto/writing-migrations.txt
@@ -272,63 +272,55 @@ only use ``run_before`` if it is undesirable or impractical to specify
 ``dependencies`` in the migration which you want to run after the one you are
 writing.
 
-Migrating data when replacing an external app
-=============================================
+Migrating data between third-party apps
+=======================================
 
-If you plan to move from one external application to another one with a similar
-data structure, you can use a data migration. If you plan to remove the old 
-application later, you will need to set the ``dependencies`` property
-dynamically. Otherwise you will have missing dependencies once you uninstall
-the old application.
+You can use a data migration to move data from one third-party application to
+another.
+
+If you plan to remove the old app later, you'll need to set the ``dependencies``
+property based on whether or not the old app is installed. Otherwise, you'll
+have missing dependencies once you uninstall the old app. Similarly, you'll
+need to catch :exc:`LookupError` in the ``apps.get_model()`` call that
+retrieves models from the old app. This approach allows you to deploy your
+project anywhere without first installing and then uninstalling the old app.
+
+Here's a sample migration:
 
 .. snippet::
-    :filename: myapp/migrations/0124_ensure_dependencies.py
+    :filename: myapp/migrations/0124_move_old_app_to_new_app.py
 
     from django.apps import apps as global_apps
     from django.db import migrations
 
-    def forward(apps, schema_editor):
-        """
-        see below
-        """
-
-    class Migration(migrations.Migration):
-
-        operations = [
-            migrations.RunPython(forward, migrations.RunPython.noop),
-        ]
-        dependencies = [
-            ('myapp', '0123_the_previous_migration'),
-            ('new_external_app', '0001_initial'),
-        ]
-
-        if global_apps.is_installed('old_external_app'):
-            dependencies.append(('old_external_app', '0001_initial'))
-
-In your data migration method, you will need to test for the old application
-model:
-
-.. snippet::
-    :filename: myapp/migrations/0124_ensure_dependencies.py
-
-    def forward(apps, schema_editor):
+    def forwards(apps, schema_editor):
         try:
-            OldModel = apps.get_model('old_external', 'OldModel')
+            OldModel = apps.get_model('old_app', 'OldModel')
         except LookupError:
+            # The old app isn't installed.
             return
 
-        NewModel = apps.get_model('new_external', 'NewModel')
+        NewModel = apps.get_model('new_app', 'NewModel')
         NewModel.objects.bulk_create(
             NewModel(new_attribute=old_object.old_attribute)
             for old_object in OldModel.objects.all()
         )
 
-This way you can deploy your application anywhere without first installing
-and then uninstalling your old external dependency. If the old external
-dependency is not installed when the migration runs it will just do nothing
-instead of migrating the data.
+    class Migration(migrations.Migration):
+        operations = [
+            migrations.RunPython(forwards, migrations.RunPython.noop),
+        ]
+        dependencies = [
+            ('myapp', '0123_the_previous_migration'),
+            ('new_app', '0001_initial'),
+        ]
 
-Please take also into consideration what you want to happen when the migration
-is unapplied - you could either do nothing or remove some or all data from
-the new application model; adjust the second argument of the
+        if global_apps.is_installed('old_app'):
+            dependencies.append(('old_app', '0001_initial'))
+
+
+
+Also consider what you want to happen when the migration is unapplied. You
+could either do nothing (as in the example above) or remove some or all of the
+data from the new application. Adjust the second argument of the
 :mod:`~django.db.migrations.operations.RunPython` operation accordingly.