Fixed #17572 —— A few grammar errors in the comments framework example page.

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.. highlightlang:: html+django
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Example of using the in-built comments app
Example of using the built-in comments app
===========================================
Follow the first three steps of the quick start guide in the
:doc:`documentation </ref/contrib/comments/index>`.
Now suppose, you have an app (``blog``) with a model (``Post``)
to which you want to attach comments. Let us also suppose that
to which you want to attach comments. Let's also suppose that
you have a template called ``blog_detail.html`` where you want
to display the comments list and comment form.
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========
First, we should load the ``comment`` template tags in the
``blog_detail.html`` so that we can use it's functionality. So
``blog_detail.html`` so that we can use its functionality. So
just like all other custom template tag libraries::
{% load comments %}
Next, let us add the number of comments attached to the particular
Next, let's add the number of comments attached to the particular
model instance of ``Post``. For this we assume that a context
variable ``object_pk`` is present which gives the ``id`` of the
instance of ``Post``.
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comments/list.html
To get a list of comments, we make use of the :ttag:`get_comment_list` tag.
This tag's usage is very similar to the :ttag:`get_comment_count` tag. We
need to remember that the :ttag:`get_comment_list` returns a list of comments
and hence we will have to iterate through them to display them::
Using this tag is very similar to the :ttag:`get_comment_count` tag. We
need to remember that :ttag:`get_comment_list` returns a list of comments
and hence we have to iterate through them to display them::
{% get_comment_list for blog.post object_pk as comment_list %}
{% for comment in comment_list %}
@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ comments. There are two ways of doing so. The first is when you want to
display the comments template available under your ``comments/form.html``.
The other method gives you a chance to customize the form.
The first method makes use of the :ttag:`render_comment_form` tag. It's usage
The first method makes use of the :ttag:`render_comment_form` tag. Its usage
too is similar to the other three tags we have discussed above::
{% render_comment_form for entry %}
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=====
Suppose you want to export a :doc:`feed </ref/contrib/syndication>` of the
latest comments, you can use the in-built :class:`LatestCommentFeed`. Just
latest comments, you can use the built-in :class:`LatestCommentFeed`. Just
enable it in your project's ``urls.py``:
.. code-block:: python
@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ Moderation
Now that we have the comments framework working, we might want to have some
moderation setup to administer the comments. The comments framework comes
in-built with :doc:`generic comment moderation
built-in with :doc:`generic comment moderation
</ref/contrib/comments/moderation>`. The comment moderation has the following
features (all of which or only certain can be enabled):
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* Email new comments to the site-staff.
To enable comment moderation, we subclass the :class:`CommentModerator` and
register it with the moderation features we want. Let us suppose we want to
register it with the moderation features we want. Let's suppose we want to
close comments after 7 days of posting and also send out an email to the
site staff. In ``blog/models.py``, we register a comment moderator in the
following way: